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      Rem's POV

"ANDY!!!!!" I scream as his body goes limp and he falls to the ground. A crimson stream begins to flow from the side of his head.
I feel my legs get weak and I kneel next to his head and tears begin to flow, like a faucet, from my eyes. Andy please be okay, please, please be okay. I check his neck for a pulse and to my relief, I find one. Oh Thank God he's still alive! I look up from Andy and see my father standing over us, still holding the bottle in his hand. A sedistic smile forms on his lips as he looks down at us.
"YOU BASTARD!!!!!!!!" I yell, all my anger that has been bottled up for who knows how long, finally all comes out.
"HOW DARE YOU!!!!!!" He says raising the bottle once again.
I close my eyes and awaite the sickening crack of the bottle hitting my skull, but it doesn't come. I look up and see Jake holding my father's arm, preventing him form hitting me.
"Rem, here." Jake says, tossing me his phone, it lands in front of me.
"Call Ashley, QUICK!!!" Jake yells as he continues to fight against my father.
I pick up the phone and begin to look through the contacts. it doesn't take me long to find his number and I dial it. The phone rings a few times, Please pick up Ashley, please. He picks up before the voicemail answers.

    Ashley's POV

Just as we finish packing up Kaila's stuff, "Sexting" by Blood on The Dance Floor breaks the scilence. Everyone stops what they are doing and stares at me.
"You would have that as your ringtone." Kaila says picking up a suitcase, laughing her ass off.
I take the phone out of my back pocket and see Jake's number on the screen.
"Who is it Ash?" CC asks still looking at me.
"it's Jake, i'll put it on speaker so we can all talk to him."
I answer the phone and put it on speaker.
"Hey Jake, You need h-" I get cut off by a paniced voice.
"Ashley, Ashley it's me Rem! Get over here now, He's back, he's back!!!" Rem yells in a voice so full of fright.
"Rem who's back?" CC asks, fear forming on his face.
"M..m..my Father! Just get over here, NOW!!!" She yells once again. then I hear the phone click, she hung up.
What the Fuck? Didn't he get taken away last night for assult? Before we can say anything, Kaila bolts out the door. I follow her and Jinxx follows me while CC gets the bus.
Jinxx and I run down the street and follow Kaila into a white house.
"Kaila, wait up!!!" I yell as we catch up to her.
When we finally catch up to her, we find her standing in the doorway, with her hands over her mouth and tears in her eyes. I look inside and see Jake fighting Rem's father, then I look on the ground and see Rem looking up at us, kneeling next to an unconcious Andy. Tears flow from Rem's eyes and down her cheeks. Kaila and Jinxx run to her, Kaila comforting her, pulling her into a hug. Jinxx gets on his cell and dials what I think is 911, while the other guys and I help Jake out. This bastard has caused enough trouble, and enough harm, now it's time to return the favor.
16th chapter!!!! YAYY!!
Hope you guys like and tell me what you think.
I would also like to thank :A7XFan666: for the help with this chapter
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:iconshoujo-slytherin:
Shoujo-Slytherin Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Writer
He's overdue for a beatdown!! D:<
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
He's gonna get one in the next chapter, just wait
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:iconshoujo-slytherin:
Shoujo-Slytherin Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Writer
Yay!
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
hahahaha I'm writing it in my notebook now
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:iconshoujo-slytherin:
Shoujo-Slytherin Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Writer
Sweet!
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm finished writing it, I hope to get it uploaded tomorrow
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:iconshoujo-slytherin:
Shoujo-Slytherin Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student Writer
Yay!
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:meow:
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:iconunderabigailsrose:
UnderAbigailsRose Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
OMFG!!!!! I LOVE THIS SERIES!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
THX!!!
Who's your fav character and what's your fave chapter?
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:iconunderabigailsrose:
UnderAbigailsRose Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
>.< I like them both and all the chapters so far!!! Don't make me choose!
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahaha okay.
Can you choose and fav couple?
Andy and Rem or Ashley and Kaila
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:iconunderabigailsrose:
UnderAbigailsRose Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
<<; Didn't I ask you to not make me choose?
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
True, sorry hahahaha
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:iconunderabigailsrose:
UnderAbigailsRose Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:rofl:
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:rolf:
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:iconbvbaddict:
bvbaddict Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANDY!!!!!!! DX
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I know right, I feel soooo bad :'(
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:iconbvbaddict:
bvbaddict Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:3
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:meow:
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:iconpicahcuegirl527:
picahcuegirl527 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Student Writer
OMG I LOVE IT!!!!! its really sad though.
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
THX!!! and I know right
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:iconpicahcuegirl527:
picahcuegirl527 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student Writer
yeah!!!!
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:meow:
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:iconpicahcuegirl527:
picahcuegirl527 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Writer
:3
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
What's up?
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:iconpicahcuegirl527:
picahcuegirl527 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Writer
nm just got done with another chapter, u?
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Not much
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BFMVIDRAWWHENASSED Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Poor Andy :(
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I know right :(
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:iconcecilieshelly:
CecilieShelly Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
GO BVB!!! HIT THAT MOTHERF*CKER!!!! WRRRAAAA!!!!! X_X
I would like to see Rem hit break her fathers nose...
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I know right, she'll get her shot
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:iconcecilieshelly:
CecilieShelly Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Pew good, I was worryed for a sek...
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahaha
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:iconbvbandth4evr:
BVBandTH4evr Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
Yesss!!! Die you evil f*ck! I just read all 16 chapters in under an hour. I need a life....
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I know right
What's your fav chapter and character?
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:iconbvbandth4evr:
BVBandTH4evr Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011
DO I REALLY HAVE TO CHOOSE!?! Freaking impossible.
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No you don't have to choose.
Hahahahahahaha
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:iconbvbandth4evr:
BVBandTH4evr Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
good! lol!
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha
Who's your fave couple?
Andy and Rem or Ashley and Kaila?
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:iconbvbandth4evr:
BVBandTH4evr Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011
Ashley and Kaila.
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Why?

Plus do you listen to nickelback?
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MiserableDog Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
*explodes* ANDY!!! D:

I love this but I seriously need the next xhapter lD
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahahaha glad you like it
What's your fave part?
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MiserableDog Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Well if the guys beat the crap out of her dad that will be my favorite part lol lD
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
They will in the next chapter trust me
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:iconmiserabledog:
MiserableDog Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
yaaayy :D
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:iconrickmanlover21:
RickmanLover21 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Nice girl! So full of action and yet a touch of fluff too! :D
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:iconrebelangel1997:
Rebelangel1997 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
What do you mean?
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:iconrickmanlover21:
RickmanLover21 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
The story I mean, it's epic!
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